IELTS Writing · Task 1 · Map
IELTS Writing Task 1 namuna: Xarita — Norbury qishlog'i (1995 va hozir)
Band 9 darajadagi namuna javob: avval topshiriqni o'qing, rejani ko'ring, keyin namunani tahlil qiling. Oxirida o'z inshongizni yozib, AI imtihonchiga tekshirtirishingiz mumkin.
Topshiriq
Diagramma ma'lumotlari
The village of Norbury in 1995 and today
1995
- Farmland (north)
- Woodland (east)
- Fishing port (south)
- Stone cottages
- Single country lane
Today
- Golf resort & marina (north)
- Holiday apartments (east)
- Ferry terminal (south)
- Restaurants & shops
- Bypass road
Javob rejasi
- Kirish: ikki davrdagi xaritani qayta ta'riflang.
- Overview: qishloq turizm markaziga aylangan, tabiiy hududlar qurilgan.
- Tana 1: shimol va sharqdagi o'zgarishlar (farmland → golf resort).
- Tana 2: janubdagi port va yo'l tarmog'idagi o'zgarishlar.
Band 9 namuna javob
189 so'z · kamida 150 so'z talab qilinadi
The two maps illustrate how the coastal village of Norbury has changed between 1995 and the present day.
Overall, Norbury has been transformed from a quiet farming and fishing village into a tourist destination. Its natural and agricultural land has been developed for leisure and accommodation, and its transport links have been upgraded.
In 1995, the northern part of the village was occupied by farmland, with an area of woodland to the east. A small fishing port lay on the southern coast, and the settlement consisted of traditional stone cottages served by a single country lane.
Today, almost every one of these features has been replaced. The farmland in the north has been converted into a golf resort and a marina, and the eastern woodland has been cleared to make way for holiday apartments. On the southern coast, the fishing port has given way to a ferry terminal, while the stone cottages have been replaced by restaurants and shops catering for visitors. Finally, the narrow country lane has been superseded by a bypass road, which suggests that the village now has to cope with considerably more traffic than before.
Muhim so'z va iboralar
Namunadagi yuqori ball beradigan iboralar — ularni o'z inshongizda ishlatib ko'ring.
- has been transformed from … into (… dan … ga aylangan)
- was occupied by (… egallagan edi)
- cleared to make way for (… uchun tozalangan)
- has given way to (o'rnini … ga bo'shatgan)
- has been superseded by (… bilan almashtirilgan)
Nega bu javob Band 9
- Task AchievementSavolning barcha qismiga to'liq javob berilgani
- Fully details all geographical transformations (north, south, east) with clear overview.
- Coherence & CohesionFikrlar ketma-ketligi va bog'lovchilar
- Perfect spatial and temporal organization.
- Lexical ResourceSo'z boyligi va aniqligi
- Rich map vocabulary with accurate present perfect passive (converted into, cleared to make way for, superseded by).
- Grammatical Range & AccuracyGrammatika xilma-xilligi va xatosizligi
- Perfect use of present perfect passive and past simple passive structures.
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