IELTS Writing · Task 1 · Pie Chart
IELTS Writing Task 1 namuna: Doiraviy diagramma — uy xo'jaligi xarajatlari (1980 va 2020)
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Diagramma ma'lumotlari
Average household expenditure, 1980 and 2020 (%)
| (%) | 1980 | 2020 |
|---|---|---|
| Food | 35% | 18% |
| Housing | 20% | 35% |
| Transport | 18% | 14% |
| Leisure | 12% | 20% |
| Other | 15% | 13% |
Javob rejasi
- Kirish: ikki yildagi xarajat taqsimoti haqida qayta yozing.
- Overview: oziq-ovqat birinchi o'rindan tushdi, uy-joy birinchi bo'ldi.
- Tana 1: eng katta o'zgarishlar (oziq-ovqat 35% → 18%, uy-joy 20% → 35%).
- Tana 2: kichik o'zgarishlar — transport va boshqa xarajatlar.
Band 9 namuna javob
167 so'z · kamida 150 so'z talab qilinadi
The two pie charts show how average household spending was divided among five categories in 1980 and 2020.
Overall, the most significant change was a reversal in the positions of food and housing: food was the largest expense in 1980, but by 2020 housing had taken its place. Spending on leisure also rose noticeably, while the proportions spent on transport and other items fell slightly.
In 1980, food accounted for more than a third of household expenditure, at 35%, while housing made up 20%. Transport represented 18% of the budget and miscellaneous ('other') items 15%, leaving leisure as the smallest category at just 12%.
By 2020, the share devoted to housing had increased by 15 percentage points to 35%, exactly the proportion previously spent on food. Food, meanwhile, had almost halved to 18%. Leisure was the only other category to grow, rising from 12% to 20% and becoming the second-largest area of spending. Transport fell modestly to 14%, and other expenses edged down from 15% to 13%.
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Namunadagi yuqori ball beradigan iboralar — ularni o'z inshongizda ishlatib ko'ring.
- a reversal in the positions (o'rinlarning almashishi)
- accounted for more than a third (uchdan biridan ko'pini tashkil etdi)
- percentage points (foiz punkt)
- almost halved (deyarli ikki baravar kamaydi)
- edged down (ozgina pasaydi)
Nega bu javob Band 9
- Task AchievementSavolning barcha qismiga to'liq javob berilgani
- Clear comparison of 1980 vs 2020 with accurate percentage shifts.
- Coherence & CohesionFikrlar ketma-ketligi va bog'lovchilar
- Logical paragraphing separating 1980 baseline from 2020 developments.
- Lexical ResourceSo'z boyligi va aniqligi
- Precise proportion vocabulary (accounted for, percentage points, almost halved, edged down).
- Grammatical Range & AccuracyGrammatika xilma-xilligi va xatosizligi
- Perfect comparative clauses and participial structures.
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