IELTS Writing · Task 1 · Process Diagram
IELTS Writing Task 1 namuna: Jarayon diagrammasi — sement va beton ishlab chiqarish
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Diagramma ma'lumotlari
The production of cement and concrete
- Limestone + clay — raw materials
- Crusher — powder
- Mixer — blending
- Rotary kiln — heating
- Grinder — cement
- Concrete — 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand, 50% gravel
Javob rejasi
- Kirish: diagramma qaysi jarayonni ko'rsatishini qayta yozing.
- Overview: necha bosqich bor va qayerdan boshlanib qayerda tugaydi.
- Tana 1: sement ishlab chiqarish bosqichlari (passive voice ishlating).
- Tana 2: beton aralashmasi va nisbatlari.
Band 9 namuna javob
178 so'z · kamida 150 so'z talab qilinadi
The diagram illustrates the process by which cement is produced and then used to make concrete for the construction industry.
Overall, cement production involves a sequence of four processing stages — crushing, mixing, heating and grinding — and the resulting cement then forms a relatively small proportion of concrete, which consists mostly of sand and gravel.
The process begins with two raw materials, limestone and clay, which are fed into a crusher and broken down into a fine powder. This powder then passes into a mixer, where the two components are thoroughly blended. Next, the mixture is heated in a rotary kiln, after which it is transferred to a grinder and milled into the finished product: cement.
In the final stage, the cement is combined with other ingredients to produce concrete. Cement accounts for only 15% of the mixture, with water making up a further 10%. The largest components are the aggregates: sand constitutes a quarter of the total, while gravel represents half. Once these ingredients have been combined, the concrete is ready to be used in building.
Muhim so'z va iboralar
Namunadagi yuqori ball beradigan iboralar — ularni o'z inshongizda ishlatib ko'ring.
- a sequence of processing stages (ishlov berish bosqichlari ketma-ketligi)
- broken down into a fine powder (mayda kukunga aylantiriladi)
- thoroughly blended (yaxshilab aralashtiriladi)
- rotary kiln (aylanuvchi pech)
- aggregates (to'ldiruvchilar: qum va shag'al)
Nega bu javob Band 9
- Task AchievementSavolning barcha qismiga to'liq javob berilgani
- Covers every stage shown (crusher, mixer, kiln, grinder) and all concrete proportions accurately.
- Coherence & CohesionFikrlar ketma-ketligi va bog'lovchilar
- Flawless step-by-step sequencing with clear linkers (begins with, then, next, after which, in the final stage).
- Lexical ResourceSo'z boyligi va aniqligi
- Precise process vocabulary with consistent passive voice (fed into, broken down, transferred, milled).
- Grammatical Range & AccuracyGrammatika xilma-xilligi va xatosizligi
- Masterful passive voice structures throughout.
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